11 Responses to:
"Bitter Haikus"

1. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 2:15 pm

   

   unloved visitor
   take your nastiness away
   we never liked you

   ROFL
2. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 2:36 pm

   

   dear mother-in law
   you had your chance years ago
   please leave us alone
3. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 2:53 pm

   

   small girl cuddling
   sapped all my motivation
   ReeRee's soft and warm
4. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 3:35 pm

   

   House please clean thy self
   clutter abounds
   sewing is more fun
5. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 3:36 pm

   

   That last one was from me. :)
6. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 4:13 pm

   

   Oh dear husband
   If you're worried about affording a baby
   get rid of the Mini
7. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 7:06 pm

   

   Gossip Girl, Heroes,
   Grey's Anatomy, Castle,
   Spent day with TV
8. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 9:09 pm

   

   I wish I had heat
   my fingers are freezing off
   work hard space heater
9. Dionna

   Oct-13-09 at 9:53 pm

   

   Ah Home Sweet Home
   Such a nice place
   To lay my head
10. Dionna

    Oct-13-09 at 10:37 pm

    

    disgusting canine
    what if they never return?
    it's off to "A Farm"!
11. Dionna

    Oct-14-09 at 7:34 pm

    

    Hey folks. Just in case a couple of you didn't know, a haiku is defined by 3 lines of poetry:
    5 syllables
    7 syllables
    5 syllables

    Thought that might help. ;)

    And Dionna – thanks for sharing. This just brought on an impromptu lesson about syllables here at the Goodson Homeschool. I'm impressed with how well Jacob picked it up. He's still pre-reader but now he can count syllables! :)